Caligula's Launderette

Teehee. Daishis, SPEW Commandos, Sci-Fi, This Land... what more could you ask for? :D Sweet stuff, Grif.

What would I do without you, Myth? I better not find out, eh? Thanks for pointing all those out. Nope, the girl is not Ginny, it's Pleasant, she is so ...

Niamh, I’m back! Here is the second part of Chapter One. Yours, CL. “We best gather our things,” affirmed Faolán glumly, rolling up the blankets from the floor. [hmm… if ...

Thanks Myth for pointing out all those typos and such. Maybe one day I'll catch all the errors before posting. :shock: About Regan, maybe you can get her to tell ...

Guttersnipe Chapter Three: Mulberry House Regan stared at the foreboding façade of Mulberry House; it was a large, rectangular brick building. Two wooden doors, the only noticeable entrance, were dee

I knew that. Dur... *brain overload due to heat* Gah, I'm melting here in East County. treecub, examples? That would help me a whole lot.

The big question is, will adding in more description of the man take away from the hands? :?

Hiya... tomorrow I should have the full crit for you, should the opertune word. I'll touch on the detail dumping while I'm here - You explain so much right off ...

Hmm... I think this was my first draft. I posted another on TSR, hmm... yeah. Your grammer crusade was almost for naught, Cass. :shock: About the story needing drive; it's ...

Actually 'manoeuvred' is correct, it's english, just as Jack. :wink: I'll try to clarify some stufferoos. 1. last line in second stanza, I chose to insert a dash after dis ...

Sorry it took me so long to get back to you guys on your comments. Thank you all for what you had to say, and for being the impromptu Guttersnipe ...

Hmm... there are some spelling mistakes noticeably in the second poem. I'll print this out and see if I can help. ;)

I have this printed for a proper crit, I just keep forgetting it at my house so I can scan it in. :)

Guttersnipe Chapter II - Meetings Archibald Gant frowned into his teacup, The Daily Ordinance , Bethel’s leading independent newspaper, was stretched out in front of him. The Separatists were stirri

Hehee. Dusky, we rock! Sniff, sniff... tear, tear... poor armory. "How useful is a sniper underwater?" Crysi asked. - I don't know about that, but I immediately thought of the ...